The screen fades in. It blinks. Its somebody’s eyes we are looking through. We are still on the bridge. We can see the blue sedan deserted.
It seems we are speaking. Its a guys voice – loud and clear.
“Get out of the car with your hands raised!”
We slowly move towards the car. The guy seems to be getting his gun out. We see his hands outstretched holding a gun. He moves to the back of the car, finds nothing.
The guy takes out his radio and speaks.
“Code one-o-one-static-deserted blue sedan found on a closed bridge-static-no sign of trouble-static-would need some backup-static-backup in 20 minutes”
The screen blinks.
Much time has passed as we can see two more cars and three officers in the view.
The screen fades off again. The officer has closed his eyes.
We can hear the other officers talk.
“The car is registered to Dr. Danny O’Brian. We called at his home, but we got the answering machine. We have left a message that their car was found in middle of nowhere and somebody from the department would be visiting him soon.”
The screen fades back in.
We see a large door. We are inside some house. The house seems quite silent.
There is a knock on the door. The screen starts to turn to as if somebody is coming. As it turns we see a stair on side of the door leading to the upper floor. There are some pictures on the walls, not clearly visible. There is a long hall – carpeted, pictures on the walls and two doors at the end of the hall on opposite sides.
There is another long knock on the door. The screen suddenly comes to a stop and swings back at the doors. The doors have opened, though nobody seems to have opened them.
There are two men, both white. They are in uniforms. One of them has golden hair while the other has brown hair and a broad moustache.
The screen moves back in the hall as they move in.
The officer with the moustache signals the other with the finger that he is going up and then points the finger to him signaling him to cover the ground area.
We see the guy going up. The guy with golden hair takes out his gun and starts moving slowly.
The screen does not move now and the guy seems to be coming closer to the screen. As he turns right, the screen turns and we see the back of this guy facing the right door on the hall.
He stretches his hands to open the door and then suddenly,
“Jimmy!”
The voice seems to have come from the above floor.
Jim runs over the hall to the upper floor. The screen seems to have hit Jimmy as it goes dark for a second and the next second we see through Jimmy.
There are two bodies side by side lying on the ground, both seemingly dead.
The screen blinks in disbelief.
to be continued…
Author’s Notes: I’m trying hard. 