The Bracelet – Act I Scene I

This is a screenplay.

Act 1 Scene 1

We see the cloudy sky. The screen begins to get closer to the clouds, speed increasing rapidly and then it moves in to the clouds. The screen turns foggy and we start to slow as if the clouds are too heavy to pass. Our speed decreasing rapidly, to a stop and then we start to fall. We see the clouds moving away from the screen, with increasing speed. Just when it seems that we are never going to reach the ground we take a 180 degree flip to see a road just ahead of us. As the screen kisses the road, we see it is a water drop.

The screen starts moving away from the road soaring higher towards the sky, we see rain drops hitting the road. As we soar higher, we see its a sea bridge, a bridge like never before. The ends of the bridge cannot be seen on the screen. There are no vehicles to be seen on the road.

As we see from far above, a light blue sedan enter the screen from the left and comes to a halt. The door opens and a tiny spec moves out of the car. The screen moves in closer to the car. The screen starts to turn and now we are seeing the back of a woman. The screen keeps moving into the woman, into her head. Everything turns black for a second and next we see is what the woman is seeing, the calm sea below.

Lower part of the screen gets a little blurred, its her tears. The screen fades out.

We hear a splash of water as if something had jumped into the sea. We hear choking and garbling sounds for sometime and then everything is silent.

Screen fades in back. We are under the sea. The screen blinks – we are still seeing through the eyes. We see hands outstretched but there is no movement. In one of the hands we see a golden bracelet and a marriage ring. The screen gets darker as we move deeper. The screen fades out slowly.

to be continued…


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  1. #6  jagan

    citybolt.com // please coment

    09/08/20 12:23
  2. #5  jagan

    nice group

    09/07/16 15:29
  3. #4  swati

    i agree with Ag27…i m also in the queue :D

    09/07/13 23:43
  4. #3  Raul

    Nice start again. How do you get these ideas? :P

    There was this story-thing till now, and now you turned to screenplay, which is fine too.
    What is next ‘a daily soap’ ? Noooo…just don’t get there. Screenplay of movie length is fine. :-)

    09/07/12 07:40
  5. #2  Ag27

    Grt description…
    Good going… lets see aage kya hta hai…
    but dont forget that postman yaar…

    Aur haan, apni har buk ke publish hone par hame ek autographed copy bhejna jarur….
    (afterall, tareefon se hi to motivation milta hai na.. ;-) )

    09/07/10 23:33
  6. #1  swati

    gr8 description……pulled me till the depth of the view of scene…what next abt bracelet :?
    waiting

    09/07/10 23:20

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